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July 24th, 2011, 7:46 am
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Mimi-Evelyn
July 24th, 2011, 7:46 am
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This page could well piss you off, partly because Jason is being such an arse and also because there is so much to read on this page XD 124 word!! Bloody 'ell.

Talking of which; The phrase"Here's a thought for you to chew" Is actually a lyric! Song time: 36D by The Beautiful South: http://www.we7.com/#/song/The-Beautiful-South/36D
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Squiddley
July 24th, 2011, 8:36 am
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Looks good :) And it still reads well, 'cause even though its wordy they're on different levels of narrative - main dialogue, background dialogue, monologue. So yeah, very nicely done :D
3o-s-knight
July 25th, 2011, 3:32 am
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Jason is not gay?! Well I gotta say I am shocked hahaha xD this means the story just got even more interesting :'D oh so now I'm curious which neck o' the woods of England is this set then? YAY Liverpudlian sexy exchange student- because I've always had a thing for the scouse accent (and my boyfriend turned out to be Liverpudlian as well lololol) I think Jason and I share an accent fetish hahaha x,D