Divider - I Want You

April 26th, 2012, 5:51 pm
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Mimi-Evelyn
April 26th, 2012, 6:03 pm
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13 PAGES UPLOADED (wow!) Read from "Spin 5 - Page 9"

:)

Thanks for waiting around here guys! I know I've kept you hanging on traumatically! I only hope this MASSIVE update will make up for it. Only 8 pages left in this chapter (didn't last long XD) and then.... BOOK 2!! (holyshit!)
More on that later

This song... yeah. "I Want You" by Savage Garden http://youtu.be/oqGnsP4wOf0
So... umm.. what were you guys saying about me having good music taste? XD
Okay, I know its Savage Garden, and yes, I did inherit this album off my mother, BUT I freaking love this song. I think its fun and sexy, and I love the lyrics. (there, crucify me!)

There's a colour version of this (and I don't mind telling you its bloody great!) that can be found here: http://mimi-evelyn.deviantart.com/art/Divider-I-Want-You-298593530

ONE MORE THING! PLEASE go check out the fanart section!!! I've had some AMAZING new bits of fan art from some AMAZING people/friends/artists recently :) http://fruitmachine.smackjeeves.com/fanart/ PLUS there's a NEW MIXTAPE! Go check out FMs superstylin' beats! http://fruitmachine.smackjeeves.com/mixtape/

Thanks again guys!!!
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Mimi-Evelyn
April 28th, 2012, 1:13 pm
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@Monkipi Eee, thanks very much^^ The Magic position is a brilliant album, just patrick wolf in general pushes all my buttons! The guy's a genius :D
@Tenshi Yami no Neko Rest assured that question shall be answered soon :D Thanks!
@InfiniteIon Aaaaw thanks very much^^
@TwitchyWings Thanks very much! Yeah, I've been on a little break too ;D glad to hear you like it
@mananabiscuit You and your comments... <3 SO MUCH LOVE! Yup jason's recently 19. Its a little embarrassing seeing how different my art is now but meh! I guess it happens, I ain't looking back so ONWARD HO! XD
@sabbra Oh trust me I have been STUPIDLY busy XD but I'm back in town now! i've finished my college work and I'm back to finish up this here little chapter! thanks for sticking with me ^^
@3o-s-knight: Hopefully I'll be able to answer some questions but tbh, I'd quite like a lot of Sheri to remain an enigma (or at least unexplained for a long time to come), his mystique is about to become jason's hook. I guess jason's realisation that sheri sin't all he appears is a bit of a challenge for him, but up to now he's really been overdue a headcheck to ask him exactly "WHY" does he like sheri? ;D he's been so enamoured with hie "idea" of him that he never stopped to check exactly what he's been fixated on ^^ Well, he's certainly got more than he bargained for!
Man... how do I every deserve this?? I just can't tell you how much I appreciate these comments!
@Lyco: Eeeee *hugs* I'm sorry! Honestly I don't plan these cliffhangers, they just happen!
@Rhosien <3 I thank thee for your babbling! (^0^)/
@Belus I'm sorry I'm such a health hazard U^U Thanks so much for reading! You are AWESOME!
@Shiney NEVER! He is out of that closet and he ain't going back! :D
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Monkipi
April 26th, 2012, 7:58 pm
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Whoo, boy. I've been waiting for this update and it did not disappoint. I really like the atmosphere that you conveyed in these pages, from the soft, gentle feel while Sheri and Jase are talking, to the looming, oppressive feel of the flashback. Props to the shot from above on page 15, it is excellent.

Also, I'm glad that this is where the plot is moving, the groundwork for their relationship is being laid, but the conflict in Sheri's past means that it's not gonna be easy. It's good.

Also, I should comment more, I never comment.

EDIT: I notice The Magic Position is on the new Mixtape. I approve heartily, that's probably my favorite Patrick Wolf song. That or Get Lost.
Tenshi Yami no Neko
April 26th, 2012, 9:39 pm
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Holy hot rocks, batman!!
Oh my god, I am so friggin' excited right now!! I honestly have no idea how to react to Sheri telling the truth. I pretty much figured this whole time that he was gay but I'm still somehow confused as to what this has to do with Jase. Is he telling him all this because he has feelings for him? Or is it something else entirely? Just, holy crap!! So much love for this~!!! I can't wait to find out more!! *unconsciously keeps hitting next button*
InfiniteIon
April 26th, 2012, 10:00 pm
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After reading all those pages, I must say that I am floored with emotion! I'm stuck between, "I want to say something, but I don't know what I should say" and I'm just dumbfounded. Flabbergasted. Dazed. Stunned. Yep, those words describe where I'm at and how I feel to the "t".
TwitchyWings
April 26th, 2012, 10:05 pm
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Wow, and here I was thinking I missed a bunch because I was away from the internet for two weeks xD!! Yay massive update!
I'm getting more and more into this story the more you upload :D
mananabiscuit
April 27th, 2012, 12:21 am
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aftercheckingevenmoreobsessivelyforaweek *floating in heaven*
sabbra
April 27th, 2012, 1:37 am
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jcajsdfjjqñfásdkdañ!!!!!!!
just yesterday I was thinking : daw, it's been a while since I read a new page of Fruit Machine, maybe the author is very busy, oh well etc etc

and then this morning....BOUM! 13 pages??? OH MY GOD??????? what is this craziness????
:D :D :D

wow, I didn't expect Sheri to have this past, poor thing :(
and Jase sounds more and more confuse :S
aaarh! poor babies T_T
the last page just killed me (their faces are SO expressive O_O)
and the "I owe you this Jase..." => instant dead

brilliant work!!! :D
3o-s-knight
April 27th, 2012, 3:04 am
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Yeah - absolutely amazing update, I'm totally moved...just moved, it's making me feel emotional :'DD I read this last night before I went to bed, and had to re-read the whole thing, I just wanted to!

I just think, this story - it's always been and I think in mood will alwYs be so wonderfully full of pep, joy, fun/entertainment, everything I look for in a story like this - I think it's just wonderful that at the same time, so naturally, you manage to fit in a story and characters that are so much more complicated than they appear (as as we all are irl) I loved how...like... I mean this update shifts the story entirely to me, but it's all so subtle!!!

Even though all this stuff is revealed about Sheri, i'm still so confused and curious as to what he's getting at with his new look, just like Jason!! I Love Jason how he interrupts, how he really is unsure, how he doesn't really know what to make of all this, I'm glad because I don't really know either hahaha! XD also I feel like Jason must have had a view of Sheri a certain view/idea of him, and now it's breaking down before him??

Anyway it's all just so realistic and interesting I'm fascinated, it's all so sentimental as well, what a great story , and great art to boot, sorry for sort of...brain Puking all over your comic too x,DD
mananabiscuit
April 27th, 2012, 5:58 am
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*auuuuuuuugh* I just reread this, I really love this update!! It's so good to know about Sheridan!! Is Jase like 19 or so? I don't remember...*goes through comic*
edit: Yup! HAAH I reread up to the club hahaha, your art has improved so much and so quickly btw!!!
Lyco
April 27th, 2012, 6:31 am
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NONONONONO YOU CAN'T STOP THERE--! D: I'm on the edge of my seat! ;u;
Rhosien
April 27th, 2012, 7:05 am
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TwT [insert incomprehensible babbling and squealing here]
Belus
April 27th, 2012, 8:18 am
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MY HEART can't take this anymore asdghajd
Shiny(you know the one VuV) (Guest)
April 28th, 2012, 6:16 am
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ALL MY SCREAMS ALL THE SCREAMS EVERYWHERE

SHERIDAN
SHERIDAN
C'MERE BB, LEMME PUT YOU IN MY CLOSET AND KEEP YOU SAFE OK? THERE ARE PRETTY SCARVES AND THINGS FOR YOU TO DRESS UP IN AS WELL VuV
Omg but but- I didn't see most of that coming. And Sheri takes it so well ono POOR BABY. POOR PRECIOUS BABY.

Jason, you go give him ALL THE HUGS OK>? OK.